In this peer review, I offered ideas on sentence and paragraph structure. I stated that I liked how she wrote smaller paragraphs instead of three large ones, which also helped me reshaped my own writing. I also thought that asking questions throughout the essay was a smart move, however ending the essay on a question is not the best. On the local level, I made corrections on word choice (in instead of on). I also made a comment on rewording a sentence. It was slightly confusing and I thought rewording it would have made it easier for the reader to understand it. By doing the peer reviews, I have seen a significant change in my own writing. I have become more aware of both local issues and global issues. Since I am correcting other papers, it is becoming much easier to spot spelling or grammar issues or seeing that one paragraph should be two paragraphs (common with my introductions).